Part I
Unsettled Voices
Imaginative and Cultural Encounters
1Rhetoric and Feeling in Rupert Brooke
Andrew Hodgson
Trying to account for the faculty by which modern poets had âavoided rhetoricâ, T. S. Eliot arrived at his celebrated remark about âthe exercise of intelligence, of which an important function is the discernment of exactly what, and how much, we feel in any given situationâ. The insight rounds off a review of Harriet Monroe and Alice Corbin Hendersonâs 1917 anthology The New Poetry, a volume Eliot welcomes tepidly for being representative, as much as for being any good. The book, as Eliot observes, gathers a rabble of âincongruous alliesâ in a generational effort to âwring the neck of rhetoricââa phrase of Verlaineâs that ricocheted from writer to writer in the earlier years of the century, and indicated, in the terms of the anthologyâs editors, an effort to puncture Victorian sonorities on the thorns of âconcrete and immediate realisation of lifeâ and âabsolute simplicity and sincerityâ.1 Enlisted in its ranks are figures of lasting and varied achievement, including Thomas Hardy, D. H. Lawrence and Ezra Pound, alongside many long and justly forgotten: Skipwith Connell, Grace Hazard Conkling and Adelaide Crapsey are among those whose names contain more poetry than their works, and that is only the Cs. Eliot runs through the contents with an eyebrow raised, discriminating favourably (Robert Frostâs New England âis not a New England of ghosts; Mr Frost has done something of his ownâ) and more equivocally (as when he describes Maxwell Bodenheim as having ânot all the qualities of a poet, but some of them in an exceptionally high degreeâ), before a final, tart survey of the English contribution: âOf the English poets, Mr [Ford Madox] Hueffer is well illustrated by the only good poem I have met with on the subject of the war; Harold Monro is at his best in the âStrange Companionâ; Lawrence, a poet of quite peculiar genius and peculiar faults, comes off badly; and Rupert Brooke is not absentâ.2
The Rupert Brooke present in the anthology is the poet of the patriotic 1914 sonnets, a group whose defining poem, âThe Soldierâ, depends upon the opposite of âintelligenceâ as Eliot defined it. The famous sonnet twice invites its reader to âthinkâ, but, not in the service of discerning âexactly what, and how much, we feel in any given situationâ:
If I should die, think only this of me:
That thereâs some corner of a foreign field
That is for ever England.
[âŚ]
And think, this heart, all evil shed away,
A pulse in the eternal mind, no less
Gives somewhere back the thoughts by England given;3
It does not matter whether what this poem asks the reader to think is true, only that the reader convinces himself that it is. Brooke offers a patriotic ideal seductive precisely because it repels and eludes thought (âthink only thisâ), and because it does not demand âexactnessâ at all (âgives somewhere backâ [emphases added]). The fact that the poemâs patriotic blandishments should segue seamlessly into Churchillâs Times eulogy for Brooke, which praised a man âwilling to die for the dear England whose beauty and majesty he knewâ and who âadvanced towards the brink in perfect serenity, with absolute conviction of the rightness of his countryâs causeâ,4 only affirms its proficiency in just the sort of rhetoric whose âneckâ Eliot and his contemporaries were seeking to âwringâ.
But the urge to deride Brookeâs sentimentality should be restrained. âThe Soldierâ indulges sentimental rhetoric, but there are times when sentimental rhetoric can be sustaining, and at the time of its inclusion in Monroe and Hendersonâs anthology in 1917, Brookeâs sonnet offered thousands of readers consolation. Moreover, the poem shows Brookeâs ear for popular feeling; and while âThe Soldierâ submits to that feeling with dangerous ease, the way the poem licences sentiment points to a tendency which in Brookeâs best poetry becomes part of a more complex mix. At times, Brooke succumbs to sentimentality, but he is also responsive to the human tendency to succumb. The closing lines of âThe Night Journeyâ envision human life as a flow of delirious individuals, each in an accelerating quest âto meet the light or find his loveâ (l. 10):
The white lights roar; the sounds of the world die;
And lips and laughter are forgotten things.
Speed sharpens; grows. Into the night, and on,
The strength and splendour of our purpose swings.
The lamps fade; and the stars. We are alone.
(ll. 24â8)
The final sentence affirms the fruitlessness of the impulse. But Brooke speaks as one of âend-drunken huddled dreamersâ (l. 23) he describes, and the way his rhythms and syntax become whipped up in their excitement generates a vigour which transcends rhetoric through its very liberation from âintelligenceâ, and which causes the final realisation to arrive with an almost terrifying frisson. The lines expose a sentimental delusion but they also show the thrill of partaking in it. In an essay characteristic of the generally low estimation of Brookeâs achievement that followed Eliot into the remainder of the twentieth century, Samuel Hynes records how âIn a rare moment of self-criticism Brooke composed a table of contents for an imaginary anthology, to which his own contribution was to be âOh, Dear! oh, Dear! A Sonnetââ, remarking that it is âvery perceptive, for nearly half of his poems are conventional sonnets, and most of them [âŚ] say little more than âOh dear!ââ.5 The exercise would more profitably be regarded not as a ârare moment of self-criticismâ but as an instance of characteristic self-awareness. Brooke is often knowing about his abandon. His poems court ârhetoricâ, in the OEDâs sense of âartificial, insincere, or ostentatious expressionâ in subtle as well as unsubtle ways: a line like âthe strength and splendour of our purposeâ is the more stirring for the way it strains against Brookeâs consciousness of its grandiloquence. A supple intelligence, human susceptibility and surrender to feeling lies behind the wit, sympathy and daring of his best writing.
The fact that Brooke should write poetry so antithetical to Eliot is in one respect odd, since Brooke, like Eliot, was an enthusiastic champion of the Metaphysicals, Donne in particular; and the qualities he admired bear striking similarity to the passionate âintelligenceâ Eliot held up for approval. The terms of Brookeâs enthusiasm in his reviews of Griersonâs edition of The Poems of John Donne (1912) might well have been Eliotâs own: âHe belonged to an age when men were not afraid to mate their intellects with their emotionsâ; âHe was the one English love-poet who was not afraid to acknowledge that he was composed of body, soul, and mindâ; and again: âwhen passion shook him, and his being ached for utterance, to relieve the stress, the expression came through the intellectâ.6 This in 1913, eight years before Eliotâs âThe Metaphysical Poetsâ. All of which may be to say no more than that Eliot condensed ideas about English poetry that already existed in the intellectual atmosphere early in the century. And it is true that Brookeâs poems never really aim at a Donne-like fusion of thought and passion. The poem in which Donneâs influence on Brooke is most apparent, âDining-Room Teaâ, makes clear the difference in their manners. The very un-Donne-like title attests to Brookeâs filtering of metaphysical speculation through a distinctively Edwardian setting and sensibility (the poem dates from 1909). âOne imagines a young man who has been reading Donneâs âThe Ecstasyâ in a room upstairs [âŚ] being summoned by a decorous bell to join the family for a meal. He goes down to the dining-room with one of the great love poems of the world still murmuring in the back of his head, enters the Edwardian social scene [âŚ] and walks straight into an imaginative experience which makes a deep impression on himâ, comments Christopher Hassall.7 This is helpful as an account both of the action of the poem and its creation, as Brooke translates Donneâs impassioned intricacy and intimacy to a more sociable idiom. Brookeâs speaker encounters a girl across the table, and the poem catches her impression of him in couplets which are at once graceful and agile:
And lifted clear and still and strange
From the dark woven flow of change
Under a vast and starless sky
I saw the immortal moment lie.
One instant I, an instant, knew
As God knows all. And it and you
I, above Time, oh, blind! could see
In witless immortality.
I saw the marble cup; the tea,
Hung on the air, an amber streamâŚ
(ll. 17â26)
Comparison between the two poems might seem to prove Eliotâs point about âintelligenceâ. Donneâs poem thinks through an experience that âInterinanimates two soulsâ (âThe Ecstasyâ (l. 42))8 with an intensity which drives him to forge a new language for feeling; Brookeâs speaker is in thrall to his passions, his voice modulating between genuine wonder and a stock language of âvast and starlessâ skies. Rather than scrutinising âexactly what, and how much, he feelsâ, Brooke celebrates a moment of âwitlessnessââa movement beyond thought of more Keatsian than Metaphysical cast.
But âDining-Room Teaâ is not straightforwardly rhetorical, or without emotional complexity. The fact that Brooke should have thought admiringly of Donne in the terms that he did hardly suggests a poet blind to the possibilities of bringing the intellect to bear on the emotions; and some of his most suggestive commentators have wondered with more even-handedness than Eliot about his poetryâs combination of the head and the heart. Edward Thomas, for instance, wrote to Robert Frost that Brooke âwas a rhetoricianâ because he âcould only think about his feelingâ, rather than think through itâor indeed actually feel it9; yet Thomas also described Brookeâs poetry in a review as âfull of the thought, the aspiration, the indignation of youth; full of the praise of youthâ,10 which implies that if anything Brooke felt his feelings all too readily. One route to reconciling the contradiction is to say that Brookeâs poems are often interested in the spectacle of feeling, an argument that Peter Howarth has pursued in relation to Brookeâs engagement with Roger Fryâs idea in his âEssay in Aestheticsâ (1909) that âIn the imaginative life [âŚ] we can both feel the emotion and watch itâ.11 Howarth takes up Fryâs argument as a way of thinking about Brookeâs poemsâ âtacit internalisationâ of audience in relation to nascent ideas of celebrity;12 but Brookeâs interest in Fryâs conception of art as an agent of detachment as well as expression gestures towards the peculiar self-consciousness of his poetic voice, too. Brooke glimpses the ironic possibilities of self-observation in a whimsical contemplation of his own cannibalisation sent to Violet Asquith in 1913: âOf the two eyes that were your ruin, / One now observes the other stewingâ.13 âDining Room-Teaâ is the fruit of a more sustained application of Fryâs notion: the poem itself is about the elevation of experience to the status of art, a process which enables its speaker simultaneously to âfeelâ and âwatchâ his emotions and to speak out of âwitlessâ rapture while avoiding self-indulgenceâpreserving what Bernard Bergonzi called Brookeâs âsaving irony and detachment of mindâ.14 Brookeâs voice marries exuberance with elusive self-irony. The lines above surrender to feeling with an authenticating dexterity which makes it difficult to know how to respond. The rhythms of âI, above Time, oh, blind! could seeâ discompose the metre almost e...