1 Austenâs juvenilia and sciences of the mind
William Nelles
Students of narrative theory will doubtless recall GĂ©rard Genette recounting this anecdote in his âPreambleâ to Narrative Discourse Revisited: âA famous scientist asserted in a flash of wit, at the beginning of this century, I believe: âThere is physics, then there is chemistry, which is a kind of physics, then there is stamp collectingâ.â I had forgotten, though, how he follows that line: âsince then biology too has become a kind of chemistry, and even a ⊠kind of mechanicsâ (8). While Genette, writing in 1983, could not have foreseen the rapid emergence of cognitive and biocultural theories into the critical mainstream over the last twenty years or so, his comments have proven prescient. In the January 2016 number of Narrative, Angus Fletcher and John Monterosso, cognitivists themselves, discuss the conviction shared by many literary theorists that these âcognitive experiments have already attracted such disproportionate attention that they are threatening to overshadow the rest of literary studies ⊠making them seem less like a source of diversity than a danger to it,â a threat intensified by the perception that cognitive methodologies are ânot only foreign, but hostile, to much of literary studiesâ (83). As those familiar with such theories know, this is not paranoia: several biocultural critics have confidently declared that their work will âultimately absorb and supplant every other form of literary study,â including all poststructuralist theories (Carroll, âThreeâ 62), which are now ânot merely obsolete but essentially voidâ (Carroll, âPoststructuralismâ 214â15). My interest here, however, lies in presenting specific examples of practices in Jane Austenâs work that reward the application of cognitive theories of narrative, and thus more at the stamp collecting end of Genetteâs scale than at the mechanics end. Suzanne Keen, in a âResponseâ to Fletcher and Monterosso, suggests that scientific criticism, properly conceived, can create a shared intellectual space within which âwe literary readers can pivot in the direction of empiricism without fear of compromising our distinctive contributions to the understanding of readers and narrativesâ (110), and as we shall see, the earlier criticism cited below is not supplanted by, but usefully organized and extended by, the framework of cognitive theory.
While it might seem anachronistic to apply the views of modern science to a writer two centuries in the past, the brain science of her own time (the other of the âsciencesâ in my title) is closely compatible with cognitive psychology. Cognitive theory can so readily account for Austenâs model of human behavior largely because both represent a common reality and a shared view of that reality, rooted in what Mary Lascelles called Austenâs âconstant tranquil preference for a true over a false vision of lifeâ (Jane 120) that âmakes her prefer the actual to the illusionary worldâ (âMissâ 533). The fit between Austenâs worldview and that of modern cognitivists makes biocultural theory an apt framework for studying her texts, which revolve around the problems of mate selection and family relations that are fundamental for cognitive theory. Having previously argued for the utility of biocultural theory for the study of Austenâs novels (âJaneâs Brainsâ), I focus here on the earlier traces of those ideas as they appear in the juvenilia.
Critical assessments of Jane Austenâs earliest writings have occupied virtually every point on the evaluative spectrum since her nephew James Edward Austen-Leigh revealed in his 1870 Memoir that âthere is extant an old copy-book containing several tales, some of which seem to have been composed when she was quite a girlâ (217n40). He described the stories as âchildish effusionsâ (42) âof a slight and flimsy textureâ (40), and a number of later critics have agreed. Perhaps the sternest criticism offered is that implicit in Austenâs own admonition to her niece Caroline, then an aspiring eleven-year-old novelist, who recalls her saying âif I would take her advice, I should cease writing till I was 16, and that she had herself often wished she had read more, and written less, in the corresponding years of her own lifeââthat is, those very years during which the juvenilia were composed (174). But many of the pieces found early champions. Annette B. Hopkins claimed in 1925 that âIn literary quality Love and Freindship is superior to most of the serious novels of the dayâ (47).1 The eventual publication of the entire contents of the three notebooks and their increasingly wide circulationâgiven a boost with the controversial decision by Sandra Gilbert and Susan Gubar to select âLove and Freindshipâ to represent Austen in their Norton Anthology of Literature by Women in 1985âhas persuaded a sizeable cohort of modern critics that the works have very high literary merit. Margaret Anne Doody declares in the âIntroductionâ to her edition of the juvenilia, âAusten is engaged at the philosophic centre of the eighteenth century. To treat her early works as the slight works of a playful child is partly to mistreat their philosophic depthsâ (xxviii). Such a claim might seem hyperbolic given that the text specifically in question, âJack and Alice,â was probably written when she was fourteen, but for Doody, âHer genius at an early age is as awe-inspiring as Mozartâsâ (xxxv).2
The approach most frequently taken to criticism of the juvenilia, however, has been down the middle of the road, finding the early works of interest primarily to the extent that they enable us to detect in embryonic form traces of the themes, techniques, characters, situations, and plots that would resurface in the novels. As noted above, Hopkins began blazing this trail (now become a highway) in 1925: âthere is not a single one of the six mature novels whose beginnings, if only minutely, cannot be detected here, in a genre, a situation, a character, or a mere nameâ (48). John McAleer has surveyed the works for the light they can shed upon Austenâs biography, from âenvironmental factors crucial to Jane Austenâs formation,â (10) such as her reading, to a developing âsocial awarenessâ (11), to her philosophical, moral, and even genealogical heritages. For Juliet McMaster, they form an integral part of her career arc: âLove and Freindship is worth mentioning among Jane Austenâs juvenilia both because it is obviously a preparation for Northanger Abbey and Sense and Sensibility and because it forms so delightful a contrast to the more serious worksâ (âContinuityâ 724).
Despite the myriad connections that have been made between the juvenilia and the novels, only a handful of critics have focused on elements of Austenâs emerging concept of the mind and the development of techniques for representing a characterâs consciousness. More specifically, we have no systematic overview of the extent to which Austenâs juvenilia reflect those elements that have been particularly foregrounded by the abundant recent activity in the discipline of cognitive literary theory, which has taken Austen as one of its favorite subjects. Pride and Prejudice, for example, has been discussed so many times by evolutionary critics that Joseph Carroll has jokingly called it âthe literary equivalent of [the] fruit fly,â which is so diligently studied by geneticists (âHumanâ 79). Austenâs distinctive conception of how omniscience should function, her refinement of such key cognitive categories as Theory of Mind and mindblindness, her exploration of the roles of nature and education in the development of embodied consciousness, and her depictions of social minds, all of fundamental importance for cognitive readings of the novels, make their first appearances in the juvenilia and go through the earliest stages of their development there. The cognitive elements in Austenâs juvenilia may be gathered under three broad headings: representations of the mind and cognition, the role of biology and the embodied brain, and the role of the social mind. There is considerable overlap built in here, since every mind is contained in, and developed through interaction with, both a body and a culture, but of course the interdependence of these factors is a fundamental premise of biocultural criticism.
[A] Representing cognition: Omniscience, free indirect style, Theory of Mind
D. A. Miller makes the claim that âanonymous, impersonal, universal narration (usually called, after its least important feature, omniscience)â and âfree indirect style, in which the narrationâs way of saying is constantly both mimicking, and distancing itself from, the characterâs way of seeing,â constitute in combination âAustenâs greatest and most recognized contributions to cultureâ (27). I agree with Miller that to use the term âomniscienceâ in the traditional sense is to grab the stick by the wrong end. That traditional sense has been explicated by Meir Sternberg, who distinguishes three key components of genuine omniscience:
For one thing, the narrator has free access to the minds (âheartsâ) of his dramatis personae. ⊠For another, he enjoys free movement in time (among narrative past, present, and future) and in space (enabling him to follow secret conversations, shuttle between simultaneous happenings or between heaven and earth).
(84)
Rather than repeat arguments I have presented at length elsewhere (âOmniscienceâ), Iâll here simply repeat my conclusions: omniscience is a toolbox, and different novelists utilize the different tools within it in distinctive ways. Of the three tools identified by Sternbergâmindreading, omnitemporality, and omnipresenceâAustenâs practice in the novels restricts her narrators to mindreading alone, and only to a tightly circumscribed variant of that. Not surprisingly, her highly original adaptation of third-person narration did not spring up full blown, and the narrating of her earliest juvenilia, by contrast with the novels, includes features of traditional omniscience that she would later eschew.
I address Sternbergâs latter points on time and space first, before moving on to mindreading and the related issues of free indirect style and Theory of Mind. In âFrederic and Elfrida,â the first item in âVolume the First,â Austen has her heroine, Charlotte Drummond, preparing for her trip from Crankhumdunderry to London: âgrieved as she was, she little thought in what a strange and different manner she would return to itâ (8). As modest as this prolepsis would seem coming from any other writer (Charlotte drowns herself two days later and floats back home down the river Ă la Maloryâs Lady of Astolat), the narrators of Austenâs novels scrupulously avoid displaying knowledge of their charactersâ futures. Rather than availing themselves of a godlike freedom to range omnitemporally over the past and future, Austenâs narrators are as limited to the present moment as her characters, discovering what will happen only as it happens. The introduction of this more ârealisticâ variant to extradiegetic narration, in combination with other seemingly minor features, will add up to produce a major stylistic difference. The earliest juvenilia also differ from Austenâs later practice in spatial mobility: in âJack and Alice,â the second piece in âVolume the First,â âChapter the Eighthâ begins as follows: âWhile these affairs were transacting at Pammydiddle, Lucy was conquering every heart at Bathâ (29). Again, from any other novelist such scene shifting in this casual âmeanwhile back at the ranchâ manner would go unremarked, as omniscient narrators are also typically omnipresent. But in Austenâs novels, the narrator is once more ârealisticallyâ limited by being spatially tethered to the protagonist: she rarely represents any scenes at which the heroine is not present, and even in those cases the heroine is always nearby. News from Bath can only be obtained by means of letters or visitors from Bath, or by putting her heroine in a coach and sending her there. By the end of the juvenilia, however, Austen has discarded omnitemporality and omnipresence from her narrative toolbox.
Even the component of mindreading is severely constrained in the novels: while the narrator is able to read many (though far from all) of her charactersâ minds, characters themselves show the same ability (albeit with varying degrees of frequency and accuracy), which again helps naturalize the device in a relatively realistic manner. The juvenilia do offer numerous (deliberately) clumsy and intrusive examples of traditional omniscience: âJack and Aliceâ includes such notably clunky formulae as âBut as it may appear strange to my Readers, that so much worth and Excellence as he possessed should have conquered only [her heart], it will be necessary to inform them that the Miss Simpsons were defended from his Power by Ambition, Envy, and Self-admirationâ (16), and âMy Readers may perhaps imagine that after such a fracas, no intimacy could longer subsist between the Johnsons and Lady Williams, but in that they are mistakenâ (20). Many theorists of narrative omniscience would concur with Paul Dawson that passages like these, which are numerous in the juvenilia but quite rare in the novels, demonstrate a fourth component of omniscience. As Dawson formulates the âtaxonomicâ issues âcharacteristic of omniscience,â âaccess to consciousness and spatiotemporal freedomâ are joined by what is for him âthe key feature of literary omniscience: the performance of narrative authority through intrusive narratorial commentaryâ (26). As is well known, Austen rejects this device almost entirely in the novels (especially after Northanger Abbey).
Instead, she will come to rely on two innovative techniques for what we might dub âfamiliarizationâ (by contrast with the Russian Formalist notion of defamiliarization) to naturalize these exercises of telepathy: for narrators, free indirect discourse (FID), which seeks to create the impression that the reader has more or less direct access to the characterâs mind rather than through a firewall of narrative commentary; and for characters, the techniques of depicting charactersâ Theory of Mind (ToM) capabilities, by which they read each otherâs minds rather than delegating all analysis of âhiddenâ motives and feelings to the narrator. The birth and growth of FID are of crucial interest not just for Austen scholars but for literary study generally; indeed, James Wood can claim that âthe history of the novel can be told as the development of free indirect styleâ (58) without fear of contradiction. Marilyn Butler identifies the origins of Austenâs eventual mastery of free indirect speech and internal monologue in two passages from âCatharineâ:
Here is the first example of Jane Austenâs technique of comparing the evidence given to the mind with the mindâs insidious habit of perverting evidence: two planes of reality, the objective and subjective, respectively presented in dialogue and in a form which approaches internal monologue.
(171)
Butlerâs own examples do not quite fit those categories, but she is certainly correct about free indirect speech and internal monologue appearing in the juvenilia. Charlotte, dealing with a âpostilion, whose stupidity was amazing,â in âFrederic and Elfrida,â âwith the greatest Condescension and Good Humor informed him that he was to drive to Portland Placeâ (8), rendering the direct speech âyou are to driveâ into indirect speech. In âCatharineâ we are given several examples of true interior monologue, such as, âShe must write well thought Kitty, to make a long Letter upon a Bonnet & Pelisseâ (263). Austen is already using the convention of italics (i.e., underlining) to signal that this is not just a paraphrase of Kittyâs general thought, but that she is literally thinking those exact words, with just that emphasis, a device that Anne Waldron Neumann has identified as one of the key markers of FID: âindirectly reported speech or thought which quotes what we feel could be at least some of the words of the characterâs actual utterances or thoughtsâ (366). But these examples of indirect speech and interior monologue, however often multiplied, do not amount to true FID, in which the characterâs and narratorâs languages are blended.
It seems worth considering whether Austen may have found her way to FID by means of the irony that is so pervasive in the juvenilia. Louise Flavin, in a study of FID in Emma, has remarked a âconsistent patternâ in which âspeech is presented in free indirect form to invite ridicule of a characterâ (51â52), and the uses in the juvenilia all conform to that pattern. In âJack and Alice,â for instance, âthe Company retired...