Section 1
Grammatical Concepts Aligned with Grade Six Common Core Language Standards
1 Understanding the Impact of Intensive Pronouns |
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What are Intensive Pronouns?
Common Core Language Standard 6.1 calls for students to âuse intensive pronouns (e.g. myself, ourselves)â as part of a more general statement that students must âdemonstrate command of the conventions of standard English grammar and usage when writing or speakingâ (Common Core State Standards, 2010). Intensive pronouns are words used to provide extra emphasis to a sentence by emphasizing a previously used noun or pronoun (Kolln & Funk, 2012). For example, in the sentence âThe principal himself visited our class for lunch,â âhimselfâ is an example of an intensive pronoun. Note that the word âhimselfâ is not needed for this sentence to make sense; the sentence âThe principal visited our class for lunchâ is perfectly fine grammatically. However, the intensive pronoun âhimselfâ is still important to this sentence; it emphasizes that the principal was the one that visited our class and makes the impact of his visit apparent to the reader. In the sentence âI like pizza myself,â the intensive pronoun âmyselfâ emphasizes the fact that the speaker likes pizza. It indicates that while others may prefer different foods, he or she enjoys pizza.
There are specific pronouns that can function as intensive pronouns in sentences; each of these is listed in Figure 1.1. In this figure, these pronouns are organized by person (first, second, or third) and number (singular or plural).
An important issue to note about intensive pronouns is that the words listed in Figure 1.1 do not always function as intensive pronouns. In other words, you might see one of these words in a sentence in which it functions as a different kind of pronoun. This is because the words that function as intensive pronouns can function as reflexive pronouns instead (depending on how they are used in a sentence). This is important to note because although this element of Common Core Language Standard 6.1 focuses specifically on intensive pronouns, a key aspect of understanding intensive pronouns is being able to differentiate them from reflexive pronouns. In the sentence âJohn saw himself in the mirror,â âhimselfâ is not used for emphasis, but rather to let readers know who John saw, making it a reflexive pronoun.
| Person | Singular | Plural |
| First | Myself | Ourselves |
| Second | Yourself | Yourselves |
| Third | Himself/herself/itself | Themselves |
Figure 1.1 Intensive Pronouns
When I talk with students about identifying whether pronouns are reflexive or intensive, I encourage them to ask, âDoes the sentence make sense without this pronoun?â If they answer âYes,â then they are identifying the pronoun as intensive, as that pronoun is used for extra emphasis but is not needed for the sentence to be grammatically correct. If they answer âNo,â then the pronoun must be reflexive because it notifies readers of key information that is needed for the sentence to be grammatically correct. For example, the sentence âMr. Smith himself cooked dinnerâ contains an intensive pronoun; âhimselfâ adds emphasis to the sentence but is not necessary. However, the sentence âMr. Smith cooked dinner for his wife and himselfâ contains a reflexive pronoun; the sentence would not make sense if we eliminated the word âhimselfâ from it.
Why Intensive Pronouns are Important to Good Writing
Intensive pronouns are important tools for writers to have in their grammar toolkits. There are numerous situations in which writers might want to add an extra level of emphasis to a particular statement. For example, take the following passage from Lois Lowryâs (1993) novel The Giver, in which a young girl named Lily insists that her mother let her tie her own hair ribbons: âLily, standing in front of her, fidgeted impatiently. âI can tie them myself,â she complained. âI always haveââ (p. 40). In this excerpt, âmyselfâ is an example of an intensive pronoun; Lily uses it to emphasize her statement that she does not need any help tying her shoes. Note how the use of this intensive pronoun changes the tone of the statement: without it, the sentence would read: âI can tie them.â That sentence makes sense grammatically, but does not contain the same kind of tone that âI can tie them myselfâ does. If Lois Lowry created this sentence without an intensive pronoun, Lilyâs statement would not have the amount of emphasis it currently does.
Intensive pronouns are important to both fiction and nonfiction writing. In Farley Mowatâs (1963) book Never Cry Wolf, a nonfiction piece of nature writing, the author uses an intensive pronoun to add emphasis to a statement about his quest to find and study wolves in subarctic regions. Mowat concludes the first chapter of this book with the following statement, in which he describes his travel plans and his goal of locating hard-to-find wolves: âMy immediate destination was Churchill, on the western shore of Hudson Bay; but beyond that, somewhere in the desolate wastes of the subarctic Barren Lands, lay my ultimate objectiveâthe wolf himselfâ (p. 16). This sentence ends with the intensive pronoun âhimself,â which emphasizes the wolf to which Mowat refers. Let us look at the ending of this sentence again, this time without the intensive pronoun: â⌠somewhere in the desolate wastes of the subarctic Barren Lands, lay my ultimate objectiveâthe wolf.â Examining this revised sentence, we can sense the differing amount of emphasis placed on the wolf. While it still refers to the wolf as Mowatâs ultimate objective, this version does not signal the wolfâs importance in the same way the original one does. The intensive pronoun âhimselfâ in Mowatâs original version allows for readers to firmly grasp the importance the author places on locating the wolves he has set out to find.
So, why are intensive pronouns important to effective writing? As Lowry and Mowatâs examples illustrate, these pronouns provide additional levels of emphasis to statements that call for it. While many statements do not require the emphatic effect of intensive pronouns, those that do can certainly be enhanced by this significant grammatical concept. The examples from The Giver and Never Cry Wolf described in this section utilize intensive pronouns to make sure specific statements create their desired effects.
A Classroom SnapshotAs 28 boisterous sixth graders enter their English classroom and find their seats, I greet them and direct them to a single word written on the whiteboard: âIntense.â âPlease take one minute,â I explain, âand write whatever comes to your mind when you read the word âintense.ââ
The students quickly do as instructed and I walk around the room as they write. After two minutes have passed, I ask for any volunteers who would like to share one of their ideas with the class. A boy in the front of the room raises his hand and says, âMr. T.â The class laughs and I write âMr. Tâ on the whiteboard near the word âIntense.â
âWhat else?â I ask.
Student hands around the room go up; I call on a female student who says, âOne of the words I wrote is the word âpowerful.ââ
I write âPowerfulâ on the whiteboard and then call on another student who offers, âOne thing I put down is âstrong.â If you have an intense feeling, you have a strong feeling.â
âVery good explanation,â I reply, writing âStrongâ on the board. âThis is a really good start,â I continue. âPowerful and strong are certainly good synonyms for intense and Mr. T is definitely an intense individual.â The students chuckle again about the mention of Mr. T before I transition to the dayâs activity by stating, âYouâve been learning about pronouns, but today weâre going to talk about a new kindâintensive pronouns. Intensive pronouns are used to add emphasis to a piece of writing, which can, in a way, increase a statementâs power and strength.â
I direct the students to an easel pad in the front of the room. On a piece of paper on this easel pad, I have written the list of intensive pronouns found in Figure 1.1. âThese are the intensive pronouns,â I state. I explain to the students how they are organized by person and number like other pronouns they have studied. Once I have talked with the students about these fundamental elements of intensive pronouns, I transition to a discussion of how these pronouns are used in writing. âI call the intensive pronouns the âemphasis pronounsâ because they give additional emphasis to a statement. Let me show you an example.â I turn the easel pad to a new sheet of paper, which contains the following sentence: âI finished cleaning the house myself.â âThis is an example of a sentence with an intensive pronoun,â I explain. âCan anyone find it?â
Student hands go up around the room. I call on a young man who correctly identifies the intensive pronoun as âmyself.â âThatâs great,â I respond. âThis sentence uses the intensive pronoun âmyselfâ for extra emphasis. If we take the word âmyselfâ away, this sentence would say âI finished cleaning the house.â That makes sense, but it doesnât have the emphasis that the original version does. Someone might say âI finished cleaning the house myselfâ to emphasize that he or she did it without anyone helping. When we use intensive pronouns like âmyself,â we can make statements stronger or more powerful by putting additional emphasis on them.â
After this, I inform the students that I am going to show them an example of an intensive pronoun from the book they are currently reading as a classâThe True Confessions of Charlotte Doyle by Avi (1990). âThis example Iâll show you is from the part of the book where Charlotte is talking about washing her own clothes for the first time.â I turn the easel pad to a piece of a paper that reads, âIf I wanted to wash thingsâand I did tryâI had to do it myselfâ (p. 67). I ask for any volunteers to identify the intensive pronoun in this sentence.
I quickly survey the raised hands and call on a student who says, âThe intensive pronoun is âmyself.ââ
âGreat,â I say. âNow, why do you think Avi, the author of this book, had Charlotte use an intensive pronoun in her narration here?â
âIt gives more attention to her being the one to do it,â explains a quick-to-reply student.
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