In this section, weâll look at three activities that you can use to help your students identify and analyze examples of writing strategies in diverse texts that represent their home cultures and out-of-school lives. These activities are organized by grade level: the first is designed for upper-elementary-school students, the second for middle schoolers, and the third for high-school students. Each activity description provides grade-level-oriented text and content suggestions (although you should feel free to adapt some of the components to meet the particular needs and interests of the specific students with whom you work).
Elementary School: Strong Verbs and Specific Nouns in Community Conversations
In this activity, elementary-school students look for examples of strong verbs and specific nouns in language they hear in conversations in their homes, communities, and activities. The writing strategy of using specific nouns and strong verbs aligns with the Common Core State Standards for elementary school (Common Core Standard L.4.3 calls for students to master this concept), as well as many state standards; this tactic is important to effective writing because of the way it allows for students to express their ideas in clear and concise ways. For example, the strong verb âwhisperâ clearly conveys how a character made a statement; in contrast, the weaker, or less clear verb âsaidâ does not illustrate the characterâs action as clearly. An author could add a modifier to the word âsaid,â such as âsaid quietly,â but this usage would be both wordier and less clear than its strong verb replacement. Now, letâs look at a step-by-step process for helping elementary-school students understand this concept and apply it in culturally relevant ways.
Step 1: Introduce the Strategy
To begin this activity, conduct a mini-lesson that describes the writing strategies of specific nouns and strong verbs: this will ensure that all students enter the instructional sequence with common understandings of these writing strategies. When I introduce specific nouns and strong verbs to students, I explain what makes a specific noun specific and strong verb strong. After discussing these fundamental features, I like to show students grade-appropriate published examples of each one so that they can see how published authors use these concepts in their works.
Step 2: Explain its Impact
After youâve discussed the key features of this strategy and shown students examples, the next step is to talk with the students about its importance. To help students grasp the significance of specific nouns and strong verbs, I suggest taking the published examples you showed them in the previous step, replacing these concepts with vague versions, and talking with students about the differences. For example, in the book Fantastic Mr. Fox, author Roald Dahl (1970) uses the strong verb âclutchingâ in the sentence âMr. Fox and Badger and the Smallest Fox ran across the cellar clutching a gallon jar eachâ (p. 71) to clearly convey how an action is performed; if Dahl instead used a weaker, more generic verb like âholding,â readers wouldnât have such a clear understanding of how the characters in the book performed the action. In addition, Dahl utilizes specific nouns to make the information in this book as clear as possible; in the sentence âAt six oâclock in the evening, Bean switched off the motor of his tractor and climbed down from the driverâs seatâ (p. 29), the specific noun âtractorâ provides the clarity and conciseness that a more general noun could not. For example, a general noun like âvehicleâ would not provide the reader with concrete information; even a noun phrase like âfarming vehicleâ would still lack the clear and direct information that âtractorâ provides.
Similarly, Kwame Alexanderâs (2014) novel The Crossover uses strong verbs and specific nouns to clearly convey actions and objects it describes. For example, Alexander utilizes these concepts in the following line, which describes protagonist Josh Bellâs basketball skills: âHe dribbles, fakes, then takes the rock to the glass.â (p.10). This concise line is an excellent example of the impact of these writing strategies: it uses strong verbs such âdribblesâ and âfakesâ and specific nouns like ârockâ and âglassâ to clearly and directly convey information about Josh playing basketball. Without these specific nouns and strong verbs, the piece would be wordier, less clear, and lack some of the tone and personality of the original text: an altered version that doesnât employ these strategies might read, âHe makes one basketball move, then makes another, then takes the ball toward the hoopâŠâ This new sentence is longer than the original text and doesnât contain the same clarity and expression.
Step 3: Engage Students in Investigative Work
Once students understand the attributes and importance of specific nouns and strong verbs, theyâll be positioned to apply their knowledge of this concept to culturally relevant communication. The guideline sheet depicted in Figure 1.1 illustrates the suggestions I give students to help them connect their understanding of this strategy to communication they encounter in their out-of-school lives. (This figure is also available in reproducible form in Appendix B.)
Before the students begin their investigations and analyses, I like to provide examples of the investigative work I ask them to do in the activity. For example, I recently discussed the impact of specific nouns to the effectiveness of an exercise class in which I participated, explaining that the names of specific pieces of exercise equipment such as âkettlebellâ and âmedicine ballâ were essential to everyone involved in the class having clear understandings of what materials they would be using at particular times. âWithout these specific nouns,â I explained, âit would have been a lot harder for the instructor to clearly communicate with the participants. This is just one of the many examples of this strategy being used for effective communication outside of a school environment.â
Step 4: Create Opportunities for Students to Share
This step is designed to give students the chance to share the findings of the investigative work they did in the previous component of the
Figure 1.1 Guideline Sheet for Strong Verbs and Specific Nouns in Community Conversations
instructional process; this opportunity to share allows for students to integrate their home lives into the ELA classroom in academically relevant ways. I recently listened to fifth-grade students who had completed this activity share what specific nouns and strong verbs they noticed in community conversations; one explained that she heard many examples of these concepts in a discussion about cooking: âI was helping my sister make ox tail soupâmy family has that a lot,â she explained, âand I noticed that she said a ton of these [strong verbs and specific nouns]. She said a lot of strong verbs like âdiceâ and âsautĂ©â to explain exactly how to cook something, and a lot of specific nounsâthe names of specific ingredientsâto show exactly what goes in the soup.â
Step 5: Ask Students to Incorporate Strong Verbs and Specific Nouns in their Own Works and Reflect on their Impact
I recommend concluding this instructional process by asking students to apply this writing strategy to their own works and considering its importance. When I ask students to do this, I tell them that they can apply the writing tools of specific nouns and strong verbs to any genre of writing: âAs youâve seen in our discussions and activities,â I recently told a fifth-grade class, âthese writing strategies are used inâand are important toâall kinds of writing and communication. Iâd like you to focus on using a specific noun and a strong verb in a piece of writing that you create. It can be something youâre alread...