What Is Post-writing Feedback?
Feedback has been defined in a variety of ways over the years because its role and central activities can vary from context to context. At dissertation level, it can refer to written and oral comment on what students have done or written well and to what they might need to consider doing or writing next. The latter, in terms of writing, may involve adding to, deleting, modifying or amending what has been written so that the text more closely approximates the norms, values, expectations and requirements of the discipline in which the research is situated. The feedback may introduce new suggestions or ideas for the student to consider or it may refer to guidance and advice given earlier in pre-writing advice meetings and discussions with supervisors/advisors but which needs to be further attended to.
Who Gives the Feedback?
Written feedback can be a time-consuming activity so it is more often than not provided by those who have the primary responsibility for a studentâs progress, that is, the primary supervisor and members of the supervisory team. In my own context, I tend to provide the feedback first and then invite others in this team to add to what has been provided. Because other members of the supervisory team offer a special area of knowledge or expertise, they are more likely to provide written feedback on certain pieces of written text rather than on all pieces of a text in the early drafting stages. For example, statistical experts will provide feedback on relevant sections of the methodology and results chapters but not on the literature review chapters until the first full draft of the dissertation has been assembled. Those who have provided written feedback are always invited to a meeting with the student so that they can (a) check that the student has understood the feedback and (b) provide further explanation or clarification if necessary. It is sometimes the case that a feedback issue is difficult to explain in a manageable way on a studentâs text and that a detailed discussion is a more appropriate way to respond. While the supervisory team is more likely to provide feedback on the content of the studentâs text and on the way in which the content has been organised to create an argument, learning support centres are more likely to provide written feedback on academic writing and linguistic accuracy/appropriateness issues.
When Is the Feedback Given and What Is Its Focus?
Written feedback is provided as a response to a piece of text that a student has submitted. The text may be at different stages of development. First, students may submit notes in different forms to see what the supervisor thinks of their ideas before they convert this material into text. As I explain in the following chapters, my students are asked to submit, first, a detailed table of contents of what they intend to include in various sections of a chapter. Then I ask them to explain this outline to me so that they and I can see if they need to add or delete anything before proceeding further. More will be said about this in the following chapters.
Once students have completed the first full iteration of a major section (or sometimes, if the student is particularly able, this may be when a whole chapter has been completed), they are given feedback on macro areas such as the selection of content, the coherence of the argument and the appropriateness of supporting arguments, evidence and examples. A feedback meeting is then scheduled for the purpose of discussing further the issues that have been raised in the written feedback.
The second iteration is usually submitted at a later stage in the journey. For example, if the first iteration was a studentâs literature review, it would have been completed in the first year of enrolment and before the studentâs confirmation in the programme. This iteration, including a revision of the first iteration, is not submitted until the student has completed as comprehensive a reading programme as possible. This second iteration would then include the additional literature that the student had read since submitting the first iteration. I require that my students submit this second iteration before they start data collection so that they donât discover as they read further during or after the data collection process that they should have included another element in the study for which additional data would then be required.
The third iteration of the literature review chapter is not submitted until the student has analysed the data and written up the findings or results chapter. Once the findings have been determined, additional literature, relating to one or more findings, may need to be added to the literature review so that the finding(s) can be discussed in the discussion of results chapter. It is sometimes the case that parts of the literature review may need to be deleted or modified in some way as a result of the finding(s) that emerged from the analysis. Thus, the third iteration of the chapter is best completed after the findings have been described and before they are discussed.
Three iterations of the other chapters of a dissertation are also required. The timing and reasoning for this is discussed further in the following chapters. It should also be noted that between these iterations, some students may need to do more iterations of sections of a chapter before the three main iterations of the chapter are commented upon. For example, some students experience more difficulty with the creation of argument than others. If this is the case, I may provide additional feedback, both written and oral. In addition to the formal feedback on chapter sections and on full chapters, students will often receive feedback on short email or text questions that they have sent.
Thus, it can be seen that post-writing feedback is provided at different stages of the dissertation journey and that this depends on the chapter or part-genre of the dissertation being responded to. The advice and feedback approaches introduced in this chapter and described in detail throughout this book are those of an experienced supervisor of non-native writers of English. Some supervisors may provide less advice to students before they write the different parts of their dissertation while others may provide more advice, including some of the post-writing feedback areas that are referred to in this book. Finally, it should be realised that the areas covered in both the advice and feedback sections of the book are no...