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Hands and Mirrors: Reflections on Gender in the Short Stories of MacLeod and Findley
I still think ⌠we load the words manhood and manly and masculinity with meanings that are ⌠killers. In themselves.
âTimothy Findley, The Voice Is the Story
At first glance, the short stories of Alistair MacLeod and Timothy Findley appear distinctly different, especially in their representation of gender. Seemingly old-fashioned MacLeod, his roots in the oral tradition and Cape Bretonâs Celtic culture, has been eulogized by Michael Ondaatje as the author of âone of the greatest collections of short stories [Island, his collected stories]âfrom anywhere in the world.â1 Yet Findley, a publicly gay or homosexual2 writer, whose critically popular work has been described by many as both postmodernist in form and feminist in outlook, would hardly be described as traditional or universal. While Findley has been noted for creating âremarkable womenâ possessing âhyper-realistic sight,â as one critic puts it (Murray 217), the heterosexual MacLeodâs work is presented from a distinctively masculine (though not masculinist) perspective. Aside from the powerful appeal of the stories in question, initially, their differences are more apparent than any similarities. As Claire Omhovere suggests, âCritical responses to MacLeodâs work testify to an enduring interest in writing that announces its scope and concerns as universal, as if immuneâor perhaps indifferentâto five decades of posthumanist critique and deconstructionist doubtâ (288). Yet I propose to argue that the visually oriented, feminist-sympathetic Findley and the verbally oriented, âuniversalistâ MacLeod travel over some of the same territory by âdouble-voicingâ on masculinity and subjectivity. Perhaps as a result of Findleyâs perspective as a homosexual, his men and women are self-conscious about âseeingâ as well as being âseen,â leading to his recurring figure of the mirror. While not unaware of the performative elements of our identities, as evidenced by his use of the photograph, MacLeodâs storytelling often grounds itself in the Celtic bardic tradition. As this pairing reveals, Findley and MacLeod also may be seen to share common ground in nature imagery and a fascination with the fatherâson relationship.
Whether comfortable or not with the increasingly fuzzy term ârealist writer,â both writers believe strongly in getting at the real. In interview, MacLeod described realist writing simply as âtelling the truth as I happen to see itâ (Kruk, Voice 170). Findley pointed out that realism is âthe articulation of the ordinary in a way that makes the ordinary seem cohesive, when in I fact itâs not. It clarifies the messed-up lack of cohesiveness in real lifeâ (Kruk, Voice 94). At the same time, Findley addedânot surprisingly, given his earlier acting careerâthat âtheatricality [is a] very positive thing [and] writing is a performance artâ (93, 79). These aspects of Findleyâs fiction writing seem aligned with the view of gender endorsed by Judith Butler in Gender Trouble, one described as âperformativeâthat is, constituting the identity it is purported to be. In this sense, gender is always a doing, though not a doing by a subject who might be said to pre-exist the deedâ (24â25). Obviously, neither writer presents the rigorously deconstructive philosophy Butler advocates; both men, it must be acknowledged, may be characterized as adhering to âa metaphysics of substance that confirms the normative model of humanism as the framework for feminismâ (20). Indeed, that is the framework within which I am operating: As a female and feminist reader, I take a largely social-psychological approach to the discussion of gender and treat these male authorsâ âgender reflectionsâ as demonstrations of realist fictionâs capacity to create a compelling ârepresentationâ of our lives as men and women, lives which are both emphatically embodied (âhandsâ) and culturally constructed (âmirrorsâ).3 This shared acknowledgement of full human complexity, which I argue extends to the creation of moments of âdeconstructionist doubtâ about the universality of traditional gender roles, is the first and most obvious way in which Findley and MacLeod philosophically âdouble-voiceâ as writers.
Still, Findleyâs emphasis on the performative aspects of writing does point to a significant divergence in outlook from MacLeod. And this divergence will be revealed through my focus on their reflection of gender relations and identities in their short stories. That is to say, while MacLeodâs treatment of men and women returns us, powerfully, to our physical and sensual existence, Findley probes the performative aspects of our social and sexual roles as gendered beings. In her review of his first story collection, Dinner Along the Amazon, Barbara Gabriel writes, âFindleyâs most radical politics are the politics of genderâ (89). He uses his perspective as a gay man to reflect on the ways that gender roles entrap both sexes. In Headhunter, his heroine Fabiana declares, âItâs a drag actâmen pretending to be menâwomen pretending to be womenâ (341). One of Findleyâs guiding metaphors appears to be the mirror, linked in turn to his recurring theatrical motif of masks in particular and performance in general. By contrast, MacLeodâs short stories frequently draw our attention to his charactersâ work-marked hands. This repeated detail creates a synecdochal effect that reinforces the presentation of his very physical characters as not only shapers of, but also shaped by, the surrounding natural world. As David Creelman sees it, MacLeod blends âpsychological realism ⌠with a naturalist tendency to explore and chronicle the impact of the environmental forces on the individualâ (129). More recently, examining MacLeodâs treatment of work within an increasingly globalized economy, Herb Wyile astutely describes MacLeodâs oscillation between âan archetypal atavism that defies the passage of time and a historicized contemporaneity that registers ⌠timeâs inevitably corrosive effectâ (Anne 58).
In this chapter, I will first establish their overall difference in approach to gender identities and relations, by means of an overview of this contrasting imagery. I will then analyze a story by each authorâMacLeodâs acclaimed âThe Boatâ (Gift) and Findleyâs âStonesâ (Stones)âthat, in its thematics of focalization, explicitly raises questions about hegemonic masculine identity. In effect, by using character-bound focalizers, both stories offer the voices of presumably âfailedâ sons questioning the lives and lessons of their now-deceased fathers. As Christian Riegel notes,
Many of MacLeodâs narrators can be considered to be mourning, and the stories that they tell are an activity of that process: that is, telling stories has the function of helping a narrator memorialize the dead and thus partially work through feelings of grief. (233)
I agree, and would add that the same could also be said of Findleyâs first-person narrator or focalizer, since the stories to be discussed offer moving variations on the shared theme of the lost, sacrificed father.
REFLECTING ON SHORT STORIES AND GENDER IDENTITY
Short stories are often neglected by literary critics, viewed as drafts for novels, or as supplements to a more legitimate project. Certainly MacLeod, who has established his career writing short stories,4 disproves this view. His stories owe much to the oral tradition, and as Janice Kulyk Keefer notes, âOften he seems to sing rather than tell his storiesâ (182). By incorporating into his prose sonorous Gaelic rhythms and folkloric repetition, MacLeod enters the company of bards and storytellers preserving their culture even in exile. In fact, Gwendolyn Davies links his work to
that Gaelic diaspora where the next imagined island in the chain of the Hebrides is Cape Breton, and the clan, with its real and constructed oral history, is the centre of resistance against a dominant English culture no matter where branches of the clan might be physically located. (139)
Except for two (âThe Tuning of Perfectionâ [Birds], âThe Golden Gift of Greyâ [Gift]), all of MacLeodâs stories take advantage of the intensity of a first-person narrator, or character-bound focalizer. More importantly, all of them focus on a male protagonist, heightening their autobiographical and masculine quality.5 By contrast, Findleyâs short stories are more varied in form and style, and may be described as exploring the âexperimentalâ aspect of the short story in its more self-consciously literary development.6 The first things Findley wrote were short stories, he told me, just as his earliest reading experiences involved âthe self-contained entity, [the story] that is taken at one doseâ (Voice 77). The fact that several of his stories were related to plays he wanted to write (âDaybreak at Pisa,â âOut of the Silenceâ [Dinner]; Voice 78â79), or novels such as The Last of the Crazy People (1967), (âLemonadeâ [Dinner]) and Headhunter (1993), (âDinner Along the Amazonâ [Dinner]), does not diminish them as separate entries in this genre. But it does suggest that his stories may be more justly seen as experiments in narrative and subject matter. Mary Louise Pratt has suggested that the short story is the place âto introduce new (and possibly stigmatized) subject matters into the literary arenaâ (187). As mentioned earlier, it is in his short stories that Findley introduces, for the first time, an explicitly homosexual protagonist, Stuart Bragg whose sexual orientation is central to the story.7
In making âThe Case for Menâs Studies,â Harry Brod has said, âWhile women have been obscured from our vision by being too much in the background, men have been obscured from our vision by being too much in the foregroundâ (41), just as the father in âThe Boatâ is described as filling up the touristsâ photograph, and âso much in the foreground that he seemed too big for itâ (117). This intriguing insight has motivated my exploration of the two authorsâ portrayal of men. If MacLeodâs tendency is to focus on the totality of the individualâs freedoms and limitations, Findleyâs stories highlight the contradictions and burdens of what social psychologists call the âsex or gender roleâ (Pleck). There is ample evidence within his fiction that Findleyâs distinctive perspective as a gay man leads him to treat sympathetically women trapped or exploited by sexual stereotyping, as well as to probe deeply into traditional social or cultural expectations of menâwhat we might now term hegemonic masculinity. In our interview, Findley agreed with this observation; he also remarked, âunfortunately, a lot of men who donât like women ⌠I think they miss [seeing] themselves ⌠He could be staring in the mirror and he wouldnât see himselfâheâs too big! Too overwhelmingâ (Kruk, Voice 83). Don Murray has delineated Findleyâs âoptical imagery,â and its relationship to themes of physical and psychic survival. He includes among it the use of sight âto locate oneself, especially in stories where mirrors are prominent, in order to confirm oneâs existenceâ (201). Thus, Findleyâs use of the mirror in his stories aptly reflects his special consciousness not simply of problems of psychological identity, but of the constructedness of gender identity.8 For instance, in âLemonadeâ (Dinner), Renalda Deweyâs descent into alcoholism and rejection of her son appears to be facilitated by her own entrapment by a gender role that has outlived its usefulness. The woman described as formerly âone of the most beautiful ⌠you could see anywhere in the world,â loses her main audience after her husband is killed in the Second World War. Her sole activity within the home then consists of her morning performance as a wealthy lady and adored mother. She must reconstruct her feminine identity, with the aid of cosmetics, before her lonely son can enter the sanctuary of her bedroom. Looking in the mirror, for her, becomes a confirmation of the success of her role-playing, yet, increasingly, this image is no longer sufficient: âShe looked into the mirror. It was as though she couldnât find herself there. She had to go very close to it and lean one hand against the table to steady herself and she had to almost close her eyes before she found what she was looking forâ (15). Her eventual suicide is foreshadowed by her stagnation in a kind of role-playing that lacks the appropriate audience, trapping her in a static, silent image like the âfloating figure in a Japanese print ⌠the mimeâ she resembles as she prepares her toilette.
Similarly, the poet Annie Bogan, in âThe Book of Pinsâ (Dinner), neurotically obsessed with controlling or âpinningâ her environment, focuses on her image in a mirror across the room, an image once again described as âJapaneseâ (237).9 She seeks the mirrorâs confirmation that she is not only âdressedâ and âerectâ but âimmensely realâ (248). The story draws attention to her obsession with mirrors by starting and finishing, in a kind of chiasmus, with the same description of the same old women reflected in the mirrors in the hotel lobby. Her fascination with âfixingâ or âpinningâ the world around her into artistic figures gives Annie a kind of sterile self-absorption that would be dangerous to others if it were not ample evidence of the (suicidal) fragility of her own psyche.
Vivien Eliot, in âOut of the Silenceâ (Dinner) also stares into her mirror for long periods of time, as if questioning not only her sanity, but the contribution of male-dominated society (represented by both husband and doctor) to the undermining of that sanity. This use of the mirror reflection to offer reassurance regarding the achievement of a proper social or sexual image reappears in several places in Findleyâs short stories. In âDinner Along the Amazon,â Fabiana summarizes her acceptance of a passive role as the woman âchosenâ by the desiring suitor with her reference to her younger self as always âsitting in the front seat, watching in the mirrorâ (290). The title character of âAlmeyerâs Motherâ (Stones) finds comfort in watching herselfâin the mirrorâlunching with her son and daughter-in-law in the stately Royal Ontario Museum cafeteria. In âLosers, Finders, Strangers at the Doorâ (Dinner), Daisy McCabe, struggling to maintain her ladylike role as âMrs. Arnold McCabeâ against her despairing rage at the situation her husbandâs unusual sexual desires have placed her in, refers bitterly to the confirmation of her mirror that âthe lovelinessâthe innocenceâ is gone. In her case, the innocence may really be the ignorance of peopleâs true complexity: a knowledge that is stifled by rigid gender identities, Findley suggests.10
Men, too, are presented gazing into mirrors in Findleyâs stories, but often in a dramatization of a questioning, rather than a confirmation, of their various roles or personae, including gender roles. Bragg, in âA Gift of Mercyâ (Stones), glances in the mirror âthe way most people do who donât really want to see themselvesâ (36); Ishmael, in âHello Cheeverland, Goodbyeâ (Dinner) briefly regards âhis whole selfâ with horror in the bathroom mirror before turning away (185). And in âMasksâ (Stones), the reclusive Professor Glendenning catches a glimpse in the mirror of the âunmaskedâ self that he discovers later when trying on the Japanese fox masks at the Royal Ontario Museum (66). In a more explicit example of the imprisoning potential of gender roles, Bud, in âReal ...