Textual Chronology and Editorial Procedures
The prose works in this edition are divided into three sections: Short Fiction, The Wrong World, and Essays and Polemics. The texts that comprise the first and third sections are subsequently arranged according to the chronology of the period depicted. As few of the pieces in this collection have been previously published, it was decided that the edition would not distinguish between published and previously unpublished works. In any event, the unpublished works are as strong asâand in many ways, more interesting thanâthe published work. Chronology poses its own problems: Brooker produced or typeset many of the eight short stories in this collection during the same period while living in Toronto at the same address while using the same typewriter. As he rarely dated his work, it is not possible to determine or infer the exact order of composition for some of the fiction. Instead, the chronology of the events depicted in the stories was chosen to organize the texts in this edition. In contrast to the fiction, Brooker left enough evidence to construct a more precise chronology of the eight non-fiction works, which were produced over a longer period of timeâa quarter of a century. These texts all include direct references and responses to historical events and publications, corroborating the composition chronology. In the particular non-fiction texts included in this edition, by a convenient coincidence, the chronology of composition is the same as the period represented or discussed in the work. As a result of Brookerâs interest in current affairs, the worlds depicted in the first and third sections of the book share a similar, linear march through time, both starting in the prairies at the turn of the century, and ending up in Toronto before the Second World War.
The seventeen titles included in this edition were selected from Brookerâs archival collections, which include nearly one hundred unpublished works of short fiction and non-fiction, alongside thousands of pages of writing in various genres and formats ranging from utterly experimental to entirely banal. The selections were chosen based on a combination of the available evidence of completion (manuscript versus printed format, multiple drafts, submission for publication, or publication) and the more subjective literary merit of the work. As a result, numerous dimensions to Brookerâs complex oeuvreâhis childrenâs stories, his experimental fictional autobiographies, and his numerous hardboiled detective storiesâare not included or represented in this edition.
In general, the latest version of a given work was chosen as the copy-text. Manuscripts for the unpublished material come from two sources: the Bertram Brooker collection in the Elizabeth Dafoe Library of University of Manitoba and the personal archives of the Bertram Brooker estate. For the stories âHead Waitressâ and âBad Orderâ, and the essays âThe Spread of Negativismâ, âThe Decay of Artâ, âThe Price of Peaceâ, and âFree Proseâ there exists only one extant manuscript each. The stories âLike Old Jehovahâ, âThe Gilliland Houseâ, âA Glass of Catawbaâ, and The Wrong World have two versions each: an original typeset manuscript and a carbon copy with either handset or typeset emendations. For instances where the variant archival versions follow a clear chronological pattern of editing, the choice of copy-text was uncomplicated. In contrast, Brooker appears to have produced multiple versions of âYouthâs Manuscriptâ and âTo All the Nations âŚ.!â Of the former, three editions existâidentifiable by the physical markers on the cover pages as â26 Pagesâ, âThree Boxesâ, and âUnmarkedâ. Dates and a precise chronology are not available, but the pattern of textual deletions suggests that â26 Pagesâ is the oldest version, edited down to the âThree Boxesâ version, which, in turn, was edited down to the âUnmarkedâ edition. While it remains possible that the sequence goes the other way, and that the additional passages were inserted with each new versionâthe strength of the final draft and the relative weakness of the deleted parts suggest my chronology. Furthermore, a handwritten note on â26 Pagesâ reads âNot revisedâ, suggesting that it is, indeed, the first draft. In the case of âTo All the Nations âŚ.!â multiple versions of the manuscript versions are extant but parts of all have been lost. As a result, there are overlapping sections of the texts without a clear indication of chronology or finality. In other words, with the chronology confounded and significant portions of the variants missing, a stemma of versions is impossible to establish at this point in time. In this case, the two typeset versions were combined and chosen as copy-text and a transcription provided of the other pages. Without a clear indication of chronology, however, and despite the dangers and limitations of such an approach, it should be made clear that the copy-text ultimately was selected based on the principle of coherence and readability. All variants are, of course, recorded in the textual notes.
Things are only slightly more complicated with the previously published works. The excerpt from The Tangled Miracle, for instance, is based on the authorâs proof in the University of Manitoba archives, which was unchanged and unedited in the final book form (confirmed by the published copy in the Thomas Fisher Rare Books Library at the University of Toronto). Similarly, no variant texts exist in the archives for âWhen We Awake!â However, in the case of âMrs. Hungerfordâs Milkâ, the story exists in two published forms, once in his lifetime, and once posthumously, as well as one unpublished manuscript form. Given that the text was published by the Toronto-based Canadian Forum, edited by his friend and fellow mystic Barker Fairley, there seems no reason to suggest that the first published version is unreliable in any way. As such, the first published version of the story functions as the copy-text here. Similarly, âProphets Wantedâ was published but once, and has only one archived manuscript, therefore the published version was chosen as copy-text.
Finally, things are at their most complicated for this edition with Brookerâs essay âNudes and Prudesâ. The article was first published in 1931 by Brookerâs close friend William Arthur Deacon (whom he praises in the article itself) in a collection of essays called Open House. The article was reprinted in Douglas Fetherlingâs Documents in Canadian Art (1987), and more recently appeared online on arthistoryarchive.com (edited by Charles Moffat, and with an introduction by David Helwig). The complication comes from the fact that, while Fetherling used the Open House version, Charles Moffat chose an archived manuscript version as copy-text instead. The differences between the two versions are substantial as the published version excised the names of individuals and galleries responsible for censorship in Toronto. This information was subsequently restored by Moffat based on the manuscript version of the article in the University of Manitoba archives. The problematic information was likely removed for political and social expedience, even though the Open House version was published by a sympathetic friend. In his letter on 17 April 1931, Deacon writes Brooker to say, âif you and I are to stand together on this issue [censorship]âwhy we had better stand as close as possible.â Still, the impetus for censoring the anti-censorship article seems to come from the editor: âIs it necessary to hit Gus so cruelly, and him an old man? Perhaps weâll never get anywhere if we stop for things like that. I hate to hit an old man; but he does do a lot of harm. About libel?? Will he??â
Despite the fact that Brooker was at least nominally involved in the editorial process, and that this was the only version published in his lifetime, because of the historical significance of the excised material, and further because the social sensitivity that once merited consideration no longer exists, the archival manuscript version will serve as the copy-text here. The online version differs only subtly, mostly as a result of typos, from the archival version.
This accounts for all cases of substantive differences, that is, the actual wording, among the variant texts. Given that Brooker occasionally deployed neologisms or deliberate errors, and was decidedly ambiguous on his preference of national orthography, most instances of the so-called accidentals, that is spelling, punctuation, paragraphing, and capitalization, are left unchanged. In a few instances, typographical errors, spelling inconsistencies, and the handful of distinctly Canadian spellings that we have finally embraced both broadly and coherently have been correctedâall of which are listed in the textual notes.
Explanatory Notes
The explanatory notes provide additional information to the numerous cultural and geographic allusions characteristic of Brookerâs writing. The kinds of...